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2024年4月6日雅思写作回顾

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4月6日雅思写作回顾

                    

  小作文:静态图 表格 2022年五个不同国家中女性职员及管理者的比例。

  大作文:Some people say advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


老师点评

  1.本次考试 难度较小

  2.整体分析:

  Task 1: 静态图

  注意:

  1、本次小作文难度较小,考的是2022年五个不同国家中女性职员及管理者的比例,是静态图表;

  2、静态图考试频率一直较高,主要考查对于图表中不同数据大小的比较及特征的描述,还有具体数据的带入,考生需要抓住图表中的重点数值进行强调;

  3、该静态图为表格,均为静态图。该图主要比较不同国家的女性职员和管理者的比例,因此可根据数据大小特征把国家分成两类,再在段内比较详细的数据大小差异。

  重点表达:极值,倍数关系,比较级

  3.Task 2 :媒体类话题

  题目翻译:有人说广告有积极的经济效应。另一些人认为它有负面的社会影响,因为它会让人们对自己和自己拥有的东西不满意。讨论两种观点并给出你自己的观点。

  从话题上来说,这属于媒体类话题。媒体类话题属于常规高频话题,除广告外还有大众媒体相关的题目。这类题目重点要围绕不同媒体的特征进行分析和构思,常用举例论证;

  从类型上来说,此题题属于辩论类议论文。在审题时,考生要划出关键词“positive economic effects”、“negative social effects”,还要关注第二个观点中的因果关系;

  从结构上来说,可以采取4段式的写法。此题可选中立立场,主体段第一段论述广告的积极经济影响,在第二段论述消极的社会影响,在结尾段给出个人观点。

  第二段:认为广告在经济方面具有积极影响的人可能有如下理由。首先,广告能够诱导消费,促进社会经济发展。广告是宣传生产商商品的手段,通过广告更多潜在消费者能够看到商品的优点比如说外观优美,质量较好,从而激发购买欲望。这能够拉动社会消费水平的提升,给商家带来收入并推动社会经济发展(Advertising is a means to promote the products of the manufacturer. Through advertising, more potential consumers can see the advantages of the products, such as beautiful appearance and good quality, so as to stimulate the desire to buy. This can boost the level of social consumption, bring income to businesses and promote social and economic development.);其次,广告的存在能够提供较多的工作岗位,增加政府的税收。广告行业较为庞大,需要更多的人来处理相关工作如广告制作,这样能够增加社会的就业机会。如果没有广告,大量的人员会失业,政府也会损失大量的税收收入,还会造成社会就业压力和竞争的增加(The advertising industry is relatively large, and more people are needed to deal with related work such as advertising production, which can increase the employment opportunities of the society. If there is no advertising, a large number of people will lose their jobs, the government will also lose a large amount of tax revenue, and it will also cause social employment pressure and increase competition.)。

  第三段:反对广告的人认为其有消极的社会影响是因为广告会使人们变得对现状不满足。广告会将商品和社会地位联系起来,引诱人们过度消费。很多品牌如Dior、Armani利用精美的广告来包装自己的高价值商品,让人们觉得此类商品代表着高贵的地位,使得较多人花费较高金额购买产品,甚至会负债(Advertising can associate goods with social status and induce people to overspend. Many brands such as Dior and Armani use exquisite advertisements to package their high-value goods, making people feel that such goods represent a noble status, which makes more people spend a higher amount to buy products, and even go into debt.)。另外,广告会夸大商品的优势,让人们对比自己已有的东西从而感到沮丧和失望,渐渐会对生活失去热情。例如,化妆品广告会过分强调化妆的重要性,让那些不愿意或没时间化妆的人们感到自卑而忽略自己的内在美好品德,甚至产生嫉妒心理,激化人群矛盾(For example, cosmetics advertisements will overemphasize the importance of makeup, so that those who are not willing or have no time to make up feel inferior and ignore their own internal good characters, and even produce jealousy. The conflict among people therefore is likely to be intensified.)。

  第四段:给出个人观点:广告应当受到管控。要对广告的内容进行审核,要求其引导人们树立正确的价值观并购买适合自己的产品(Advertising should be controlled. It is necessary to review the content of advertisements. More advertisements should be made to promote good morals, and to guide people to establish correct values and buy products that suit them.)。


考试建议

                                 

  1.小作文:线图、饼图等数据图要作为重点内容复习备考;地图和流程图也需要关注。

  2.大作文:政府类考题需要重点关注;其他话题如犯罪类和抽象类也需要多复习。

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